Tuesday, February 24, 2009

Monday, February 23, 2009

Symmetrical Poster (1)

Free Write: What If...

What if i were born into an different familly. If i were would i have so many problems in my life. Maybe if i were born into a different family i would turn out differently in my journy threw life. I could have a better mother and father, a worst mother and father. If i had a different family would i still be me. Would i act differently. Would i still done tha bad things i did, the good i did.Being born into a rich place wouold that be better letting everything being gave to me. Or being born into a poor family have to work harder just toget what i want to be succsesful. What if i were a differnent skin color would i be steased because i was to dark or light. What if...


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Tuesday, February 10, 2009

Monday, February 2, 2009

Free Write:Family

I have 4 brothers and 1 sister. I live with both of my parents. I have 1 grandparent left that is my grandmother Daisy. My fathers father has 14 brothers and sisters. I dont know many of them some died before i was born. My family is from the north my fathers mothers parents moved to philly. But when she was just a baby. All of my sibilings are older but one.

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